Exhibition Reflection

Overall for ehibition I think that it went really good for me and my partners yesterday. For my graphic novel a lot of people liked it adn i think we did good. For the pinhole camera lab not a lot of people came up to us because a lot of people were starting to leave so my partner an di didnt get much of an audience.My group and I think that we did do good we didnt get much work done for our graphic nevel because we would start working and then a visitor would come and we would start explaining but i think that we did good. I think that my partner and my weeknesses were that once we finished explaining to someone our project we would get of task and start talking or we would just siting down looking at people walking by. Other than me adn my partner getting of task we did good.

Character Posting

After the exercise that we did today with our character bio’s I found out some new things about our two main characters. My partner and I discovered that Ariel, one of our main characters is a Puerto Rican maid in New York and she works in the house were she later than falls in love with the son of the house were she works in and we found out that we have no conflict in our story between these two characters, Ariel and Fredrick. Something that we also learned about one of our characters was that when we had to do the posing of our character and the acting of our characters, my partner who was playing his role didn’t know how to act and how to pose like him because in his bio we didn’t go to specific on him so there for we both didn’t know what to do with that character.
Some things that me and my partner are going to put into the bio’s of our characters are that we are going to change Ariel from being this sweet girl that lets her self get thrown around and treated badly and not standing up for her self to this person that is aggressive and stands for what she believes in. We are also are going to change a few things about Fredrick on his personality so that when we do something like the exercise we had today next time we wont think about it for so long on who he is and how he act’s and thinks. In our story synopsis we are also going to change a few things around so that we can have a conflict that happens which gets the story started. My partner and I were thinking on having Ariel’s father get an illness which makes her family and her to go back to Puerto Rico since in those days people that came through Ellis Island and had an illness or got one they were sent back to where they came from.